Imagine that; a seperate universe existed a long time ago and was attacked by a vast creature of nearly unimaginable size. The beings of this universe fought back to no avail, and sought to flee from the universe into another. So, they opened a gateway in the heart of the universe and in a line stretching from the Core some hundred billion lightyears long, they gathered to set through this portal. The creature (who is called the God-Cloud until i come up with a better less cliche name) attacks attempts to attack the core and in a final blow the beings of the universe strike down with a weapon which causes the Universe to fold back, which causes the Abyss to reach up and swallow the God Cloud, essentially trapping it in some Other Plane. The blow starts a chain reaction which slowly destroys the universe, and the 3 surviving members of the War gather at the portal, look back and see nothing but decay, and move on into another universe. which, naturally, is ours. and so they set up civilization, bla bla bla, create the human race, and eventully in the far future we create a religion which is to find this portal to the dying universe and discover our origins. We fly around in planet sized World Ships named Gethsemane and such, looking for the answer. dunno what the story will be calle,d but for the last 4 years ive been working on it and ive only done the intro.
ok second story- its a short story, somewhat based on the one above. Man dies all of a sudden, and asks God or someone of a similar biblical nature what went wrong. The (deity?) then tells man that at the far end of the universe a star exploded at a very precise frequency which caused the entire universe to vibrate in one giant sine wave. The wave comprised of teh energy of teh universe, and when the wave passed over earth the energy was shifted upwars billion lightyears, essentially leaving earth without any energy to support itself. Thus, the entire planet collapsed into dust.
third story- SENTIENT INC.- In the near future, a court case is held deciding on whether or not an animal is self aware enough to be held liable for a crime. The defendent says no, the prosecutor, yes. In some wierd scifi way, the defendant tells the judge it can prove the animal was aware and the judge tells them to come back in a month with the evidence. The two (brothers?) go off and create an implant which they introduce to teh animal and make it sentient. After that theres a blank zone of approx a year in which i have to think of something to occur. After a year, the brothers are getting famous for their discovery aaaaaand there experimenting with other animals. people want it for their pets, and eventually, like in the Rats of NiMH, a sentient animal escapes and starts doing its own thing. It'll prolly actually be a rat, seeing as they can go undetected for long periods of time. Maybe a pigeon. hmm. Thats all I have of the first book. The second book, which is untitled as of yet, has a front cover showing a mouse playing in a wheatfield with a radar dish coming out of its head. This book will go on to describe the problems created when a sentient animal starts creating its own sentient counterparts instead of just humans doing it. The third book will tell of a distant future where all the animals are sentient, most likely including germs and virus'. Mankind will be either challenged or helped by these sentients, depending on my mood. I like it when evil wins, so prolly challenged. There arent any plans for a 4th book, but it would be on a wildy futuristic scale where animals have conquered the galaxy and are moving onward. Imagine a book of stories about mice trading with tigers and the Great Jellyfish Conquest of Aquatia IV. hmm. and the algae has great spaceborn oceans which they keep in orbit around Sirius and constantly have to fight off the beings living in the sun for energy? GREAT. ok. those are my ideas. sorriy for spelling the like teh and the bad grammar. bye now.
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AARON! This is fantastic. I really like the name God-Cloud. And the Sentient Animals idea is amazing! I love it because its specific. I think the progression into a more galactic scale is a smart idea. It can be kind of spacey just jumping into a universe we can't comprehend. But I like the whole sine wave thing.You should actually call it "teh" energy, I know that's just a spelling error but I think it would be cool. I think it should be something other than a rat. I think it should be a crow, since crows are smart anyways. Or maybe a raccoon since they have obbosible thumbs, (i think) or at least hands only maybe a very small raccon so it could slip through places, and the hands could open doors. But damn it the rat might b e the way to go, because nothing beats the net stealth and resilience of such a creature. I'm just trying to steer you away from copying another book. not that I know the first thing.
ReplyDeletehmm maybe a mouse, and they get into a war with the raccoons and the cockroaches. the oppossums team up with the raccoons and they have this giant gang war...hmmthnks for teh comment XD
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